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11/18/08   Further reading for folks intrigued by the MoD concept - Wired's "Five Gadgets that were Killed by the Cellphone":

http://blog.wired.com/gadgets/2008/11/five-gadget-whi.html

- Jemiah, Portland

11/17/08   Gee, thanks everybody! I'm a fan, too - I've been loving these characters for a long time, and I'm so happy to have the chance to write about them. Hope you keep digging the scene!

- Jemiah, Portland, Oregon

11/13/08   Also, you're author photo is devestating. :)

- spacedog, earth

11/13/08   I.want.more.

I've always dug your writing, but really Jem, you're getting better and better. This has even more polish and flow, and I was engrossed pretty much from go.

Females as leads with sci-fi,dystopia and body-tech elements are on the money.

Please, please keep writing.

*LOVE*

- spacedog, earth

11/12/08   This is a wonderful start to a great project! I must admit Jemiah put it down, created vivid visuals, and sucked me right in. I can't wait to read more and you bet I'm telling others about it! Fantastic stuff quite honestly. I'm proud to be part of your world. TLJ

- Terry, Alamogordo, New Mexico

11/11/08   Very intriguing start! I love the unique blend of real-world and online imagery, and the characters already have me well invested. Vivid and engaging - can't wait for the rest.

- Deb, Sydney

11/06/08   I'm hooked! Love the kid character, she doesn't fall into the trap of being just "cute" or just a plot device, she really comes to life. The world, too, seems real and scarily plausible. And yay for a strong female lead character. She's awesome and seems like she's going to be kickass.

- Amy, New Mexico

11/04/08   This is phenomenal. Jemiah is one of my favorite authors in the entire world, and I am so excited that she's branching into this wovel. I've been stoked about the project since I first heard about it, and it is WONDERFUL so far. Can't wait to see what happened to the little girl--- and get some awesome backstory on Moth and Locust!!!!! :)

- Amanda Panda, Waco, TX

11/04/08   Love the sci-fi element, and this first chapter really grabbed me.

- Marina, Arizona

11/03/08   Yay! Glad to see the first chapter is up!

- Mark Morgan, Medford, OR

11/03/08   Cool!

- Rose O'Keefe, Portland, OR

11/03/08   Let's get this thing going...

- Victoria, Portland